Oh, this whole thing is very excellent. Tight, dense plot, brotherly banter & concern, and dripping sexual tension. I also like the extra layer of two different POVs -- seeing the brothers from the inside and the outside, as well as furthering the character mystery.

And really, who doesn't love a story with Lindsey in it? :) (I thought of Wolfram & Hart with the remembered line about the jury, but forgot about it until he remembers brushing his teeth wrong, and then it just clicked - oh, Lindsey!)

Great job!