Wincest in the sequel, right? Because I'm itchy with curiosity now. You can't just throw out lines like,
Except isn't that interesting: the look on his face, he doesn't get it, still.
and, you know, leave it at that!
Love the story, love the plot that you can sink teeth into, more to it than just distraction device and something to ponder and for the boys to solve, as paralleled to the mystery they can't figure out and that is what happened to 'JD.' And I love how you use the second person POV to bring that story closer to the reader but, at the same time, it's distancing because the reader doesn't know anything. And I like how you reveal bits and pieces of JD throughout the story - I mean, all things considered, I sort of knew before I started reading what the pairing would be (I is smrt like that) but it's great how you go from a point of 'having no clue' to the point where you see JD from the brothers' perspective and stuff.
I'm babbling. This is wonderful. Please to be writing sequel.
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Except isn't that interesting: the look on his face, he doesn't get it, still.
and, you know, leave it at that!
Love the story, love the plot that you can sink teeth into, more to it than just distraction device and something to ponder and for the boys to solve, as paralleled to the mystery they can't figure out and that is what happened to 'JD.' And I love how you use the second person POV to bring that story closer to the reader but, at the same time, it's distancing because the reader doesn't know anything. And I like how you reveal bits and pieces of JD throughout the story - I mean, all things considered, I sort of knew before I started reading what the pairing would be (I is smrt like that) but it's great how you go from a point of 'having no clue' to the point where you see JD from the brothers' perspective and stuff.
I'm babbling. This is wonderful. Please to be writing sequel.