Wow, that was SO hot. Really, really hot. I also really loved the little clues as to the identity of JD...I was hoping it was Lindsey, but you did a great job of really keeping his identity ambiguous enough so that I was never 100% sure.
I really liked the dynamic between the three characters, and I liked Sam slowly figuring out (with JD's help!) that his reaction to Dean hooking up might be more than just brotherly concern.
The second person POV worked for me in the fic (it often doesn't), but I thought it helped differentiate JD from Sam and Dean, and also sort of isolate him from himself, which would make sense, since he can't remember who he is.
There are so many things about this that I liked that I could go on and on...the dialogue, the plot itself, the so OMFG hot porn, but that could get lengthy. Just...great, awesome job. I can't wait to read more, either of this or other collaborations you guys have in mind. :D
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I really liked the dynamic between the three characters, and I liked Sam slowly figuring out (with JD's help!) that his reaction to Dean hooking up might be more than just brotherly concern.
The second person POV worked for me in the fic (it often doesn't), but I thought it helped differentiate JD from Sam and Dean, and also sort of isolate him from himself, which would make sense, since he can't remember who he is.
There are so many things about this that I liked that I could go on and on...the dialogue, the plot itself, the so OMFG hot porn, but that could get lengthy. Just...great, awesome job. I can't wait to read more, either of this or other collaborations you guys have in mind. :D