Oh heavens - that was fantastic. You have the whole voice nailed, and the way you tell it, vignettes zipping back and forth, past and present, through Tim's life, so that it takes a little while to figure out what's happening, is enticing and engaging... Plus the Tim you portray, slowly growing into the decent man that you can guess, potentially, inside the fucked up adolescent... Oh, it was a joy to read.

Thank you.