ext_19537 ([identity profile] ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] topaz119 2007-10-17 02:35 pm (UTC)

I like the modern twist you give, and the narrative voice. Humorous just where it needs to be. Also? The heimlich thing chocked me. Ironic, no?
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