ext_28548 ([identity profile] mrflibbleseyes.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] topaz119 2008-02-04 12:49 am (UTC)

Wow, that was intense, in a - can't catch my breath, don't know what to say - way.

The way you've written the pushing of Jensen's control is gorgeous and this line Jensen knows Chris, knows every single line and dodge Chris can pull, which leaves Chris with nothing to hide behind. Not that he's trying to hide, not now, but he doesn't blame Jensen for double-checking. is lovely.

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