ext_17760 ([identity profile] jackfan2.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] topaz119 2010-06-17 06:57 pm (UTC)

I absolutely adored this. I especially appreciated how mature you made the J's. I've read plenty of high school and college AU's and I get the tumultuous emotions then, but even then it can get a little over the top. I've read plenty of fics of the boys in their later years and still it seems to get overly emo on one or both of them and I just kinda hafta squint to get past it.

I didn't get that here. Not at all. It was a mature relationship built on friendship that springs a love and compatibility that I've seen rarely done in J2 fics. It was awesome and sweet and hot. REALLY hot, and of course it would be with those two.

EDIT: And I never read Sugar Shock.. I'll be remedying that now :D

Lovely work!!!!

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