I loved it. The slow development of the characters, the feel of the characters' lives. You did it perfectly.
And I liked that you just gave us a glimpse into Jensen's life before. Enough for us to understand his issues but, not too much that the focus is lost.
And the underground restaurant thing. Terrific. I've heard a lot about these things and it was awesome that you used the idea.
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I loved it. The slow development of the characters, the feel of the characters' lives. You did it perfectly.
And I liked that you just gave us a glimpse into Jensen's life before. Enough for us to understand his issues but, not too much that the focus is lost.
And the underground restaurant thing. Terrific. I've heard a lot about these things and it was awesome that you used the idea.
I enjoyed reading the story. Great job :)