ext_338235 ([identity profile] goldie3.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] topaz119 2010-06-17 07:39 pm (UTC)

Your fic made me so hungry. Literally.

I loved it. The slow development of the characters, the feel of the characters' lives. You did it perfectly.

And I liked that you just gave us a glimpse into Jensen's life before. Enough for us to understand his issues but, not too much that the focus is lost.

And the underground restaurant thing. Terrific. I've heard a lot about these things and it was awesome that you used the idea.

I enjoyed reading the story. Great job :)

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