This is excellent work! I love the way you've drawn both characters and dealt with McGarrett's issues in particular (he has more of them than Danno, after all). It seems to be easy to fall into the trap of writing Steve as a hotshot stud or as a closeted wreck, but you've avoided that and made him a driven, competent man who operates by refusing to acknowledge difficulties. Your stable, emotionally and professionally competent Danny is just as wonderful. Props also for incorporating the bantering and bickering in just the right quantity and tone - not overwhelming, neither hostile nor idle - and really building in the way the whole team works as a unit. Many thanks for this.

(Also, the sex was hot.)