Yay, z, thank you! You don't know how spazzed I've been about finishing this off and getting it right--when I started, it was just this little thing, you know? And then it kept building and then this part kept getting *longer*... I'm really happy to hear that it worked for you, that I got the voices right for you and all. (also, insert my standard yay! the sex wasn't cringeworthy, because I can never tell by the time I'm done poking at it.)