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help?
Ok, so the last thing I wrote was blessed with a POV character who barely stopped her internal monologue long enough to breathe (♥ Darcy ♥) which made it so much easier to write her story.
This thing I'm working on now? Not so much. It's coming out of my head in very spare and stripped-down bits and pieces--so much so that I have no idea how well (or if) they actually tell the story.
My default in such situations is to whine at![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
withdiamonds or without_me, but they really deserve a break after 40,000 words of a fandom that is not theirs, so.
If there's anybody who might be inclined to read post-movie Clint/Coulson and tell me if it's working, I would be endlessly grateful. It's only about 5K now (but seriously: ALL THE SPOILERS. If you don't know what I'm talking about, please do not let me deprive you of your hard-earned "Whedon, you bastard" moment.)
Thank youuuuuu, mwhah.
This thing I'm working on now? Not so much. It's coming out of my head in very spare and stripped-down bits and pieces--so much so that I have no idea how well (or if) they actually tell the story.
My default in such situations is to whine at
withdiamonds or without_me, but they really deserve a break after 40,000 words of a fandom that is not theirs, so.If there's anybody who might be inclined to read post-movie Clint/Coulson and tell me if it's working, I would be endlessly grateful. It's only about 5K now (but seriously: ALL THE SPOILERS. If you don't know what I'm talking about, please do not let me deprive you of your hard-earned "Whedon, you bastard" moment.)
Thank youuuuuu, mwhah.