topaz119: (Hawkeye)
topaz119 ([personal profile] topaz119) wrote2012-05-24 09:40 am

help?

Ok, so the last thing I wrote was blessed with a POV character who barely stopped her internal monologue long enough to breathe (♥ Darcy ♥) which made it so much easier to write her story.

This thing I'm working on now? Not so much. It's coming out of my head in very spare and stripped-down bits and pieces--so much so that I have no idea how well (or if) they actually tell the story.

My default in such situations is to whine at [livejournal.com profile] withdiamonds or [livejournal.com profile] without_me, but they really deserve a break after 40,000 words of a fandom that is not theirs, so.

If there's anybody who might be inclined to read post-movie Clint/Coulson and tell me if it's working, I would be endlessly grateful. It's only about 5K now (but seriously: ALL THE SPOILERS. If you don't know what I'm talking about, please do not let me deprive you of your hard-earned "Whedon, you bastard" moment.)

Thank youuuuuu, mwhah.

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