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topaz119 ([personal profile] topaz119) wrote2006-09-14 03:37 pm

5 Things - Supernatural

Five things that make John Winchester so proud his throat chokes up.



1. Just getting Dean to sit down is hard enough; keeping him flat on his back and quiet is next to impossible. John growls and orders and threatens, Jim reasons and sympathizes, but Dean has more energy than any three normal twelve-year-olds. Nothing works for more than two minutes until Sammy shows up in the hastily rigged-up sickroom in the rectory's office and parks himself next to Dean's bed.

Dean snaps at him, tells him to just go already, don't even get comfortable, Sammy, and concussion or no concussion, John fully intends to put a stop to that attitude, but Sam just pulls a stack of Sports Illustrateds from his backpack and starts reading.

Dean still mutters and groans, but Sam's high, clear voice never stops, stumbling only a little over player names and some of the more involved game descriptions. It's not until John comes into the room, that he can see where Sam's hand is petting Dean's arm slowly, almost as if he's gentling a horse.


2. "Wait," Sam says, his expression mutinous. "Let me get this straight. We help people, we have this mission, that's more important than anything, but we only help them if they're getting hurt by something evil that's not human?"

"Sam," John growls, because Sam will argue anything to death and this is not up for discussion. This is none of their concern; Sam's old enough to understand that, but he plows ahead, fierce and determined.

"Because it's okay to stand by and let someone get hurt by something evil that is human?"

"He's just a two-bit bully, Sammy," Dean says.

"He goes out of his way to hurt people, Dean," Sam snaps back. "I know he's not trying to end the world, but that doesn't mean he didn't put two kids I know in the hospital." He turns back to John, almost spitting out the words. "It doesn't mean he shouldn't be stopped before he does it again."

He stares across the table at John, jaw set, eyes narrowed and John finally sighs. "Fine. Dean--"

"I can handle it," Sam interrupts, standing up, and it's a constant shock these days, how tall he's gotten since he turned 15. As tall as Dean in the last few months, and if John's not mistaken, he won't stop until he's past both of them. "It'll attract a lot less attention if it's just me, and isn't that part of this whole stupid life?" He grabs his backpack and heads out the door.

John doesn't have to say a word; Dean's already reaching for his jacket. "On it," he says.

When John comes back that night, Dean's looks up from working on the car. "Took him out in a single punch," he says. Sam's hunched over the kitchen table, engrossed in homework, and no one mentions the ice pack he holds against his knuckles.


3. John does get there in time, even though Sam doesn't notice. He's there in time to hear Dean's name announced, see him cross the stage, quick and confident. Sam's standing and cheering, whistling like Dean taught him, and John catches the smirk Dean throws Sam's way even from the back of the crowded old gym. His boys, they poke and prod and needle each other all the time, but they're there for each other and a father can't ask for much more than that.


4. It's a simple message and one recorded quickly--If this is an emergency, call my son, Dean. 866-907-3235. He can help--but John's never said anything more true.


5. It takes John five hours to dig through what remains of the collapsed house, five hours of keeping everything but the immediate task at hand out of his mind, five hours of not hearing anything but Dean's last shout, "Sammy, get back!" before the I-beam gave way and three rotted, diseased, cursed floors fell between them. John will not allow himself to think of anything but the next piece of debris that can be cleared. This one, and then that one; sheetrock and flooring, plaster and brick and wood, one after another after another, until he reaches for the next and half-falls through the hole he's opened up.

Before his brain can even process that he's through, Dean's in front of him, shotgun still carefully leveled, calling back to Sam that it's okay, and then Sam's there, too, holding the hand of one of the local kids, who's even younger than Sammy and who's sniffling a little.

"See?" Sam's saying, his tone comforting and reassuring. "I told you there wasn't any reason to be scared." Dean lowers the shotgun and John waits until the last of the missing kids is outside--Dean counting them off carefully as John lifts them clear, Sam telling him each one's name--and then he sits down heavily next to Dean and pulls Sammy into his lap.

"Good work," he says, or tries to, but his focus is gone and his voice is stuck somewhere in his chest and he's not sure either of them hear him.

[identity profile] ingkir.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 09:33 am (UTC)(link)
Wee!Sam reading to Wee!Dean - such a lovely image.

And number four really brings out the love in my love/hate relationship with Papa Winchester.

Great five things :)

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 01:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you--John's such a fascinating character to me, almost a complete enigma. I really enjoyed playing with these five.
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[identity profile] merihn.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 11:18 am (UTC)(link)
That was awesome. So sad! Last one where he's searching for them, you wrote out the urgency perfectly.

I really liked how Sam was arguing to take out a man who was hurting other people, that was really good.

Great job.

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 01:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! When I first started writing, I had a completely different idea of where I was going to go, but then Sam started arguing, and well, here we are. I'm glad they worked for you, too.

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[personal profile] embroiderama 2006-09-15 11:38 am (UTC)(link)
I really love all of these--they're really wonderful! The first is my favorite, though, for the connection between the boys. Lovely!

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 01:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you--Sam and Dean work so well together in present day, I figured they had to be almost inseparable as kids.

[identity profile] daraq.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 01:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, these are gorgeous! Thank you.

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 01:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!
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[identity profile] tsuki-no-bara.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 02:04 pm (UTC)(link)
the first and third made me sniffle - the boys are so connected, and john's gotta think he maybe did something right that they love each other that much. #4 might be my favorite, tho, because i don't think john would ever say in words how much he trusts dean to do right by people, but that one sentence shows all the confidence he has in his son.

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 02:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I don't think John ever *would* say something directly, to either of them--when the demon *does*, Dean knows there's something wrong, but John *does* leave that message, and that says so much to me. And Sam and Dean are so connected in present day--I had fun thinking of how they got to that point as kids.

[identity profile] zionsstarfish.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 03:29 pm (UTC)(link)
All of them are lovely! But #5 is my favourite... your John voice is so steady and calm, even when it's five hours and cursed floors... until it's all over, and then...

*meeps*

yeah. I love the little detail of Sam telling John each kid's name, and Dean counting them off.

Thank you!

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 04:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you; I'm so glad they worked for you. John is a really interesting character to me so these were a lot of fun to write. And the last one--I actually had this posted and was rereading and then that bit, about Dean making sure they got all the kids and Sam knowing who each one of them was, popped into my head, and made the boys more real to me. So, yeah, I'm doing a little chair dance that it pinged you so strongly. =)

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 05:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] bluesister.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 06:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Sam's high, clear voice never stops, stumbling only a little over player names and some of the more involved game descriptions

Sweet moments and interesting insight. John is such a rich vein, yeah?

This one, and then that one; sheetrock and flooring, plaster and brick and wood, one after another after another, until he reaches for the next and half-falls through the hole he's opened up.

Musical language. I liked listening to it. :)

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 07:37 pm (UTC)(link)
John is such a rich vein, yeah?

He really is. Almost everything we know is filtered through Sam and Dean, which, hi, unreliable narrators anyone? There's so much that's just a complete mystery.

Musical language. I liked listening to it

Thanks very much!
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[personal profile] poisontaster 2006-09-15 07:55 pm (UTC)(link)
There are very few authors that write MY John; the one that's a father that really really loves his boys and yet is and can be very unforgiving and make a lot of really harsh mistakes. This is my John and I love it.

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 08:33 pm (UTC)(link)
yes, yes, yes. John, he's just soimportant, to both Sam and Dean, there's no question how much he loves them, but he makes such mistakes. He leaves that outgoing message, yet Dean knows it's the demon talking when it offers reasonable praise. He's such a fascinating character, sketched in mostly by the boys' reactions.

Thank you; I'm so glad he rang true for you.
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[personal profile] gelliaclodiana 2006-09-15 09:26 pm (UTC)(link)
I love these -- the specific things John is proud of really catch at me, you know? I think I liked number 2 and 4 the best -- four, because it says so little andis so exactly right. He'll never say it outright, but that's all the praise in the world right there.

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-16 12:18 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you; I'm so glad they worked for you! The fourth one...I just rewatched Phantom Traveler, and after seeing the whole season, you know for certain that John absolutely doesn't suffer fools. For him to say that about Dean--there's nothing that could be higher praise.

[identity profile] dodger-winslow.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 09:47 pm (UTC)(link)
I love all of them, but #4 is perfect. Simple. Elegant. True. Perfect.

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-16 12:25 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you; I'm glad you liked them! As for #4, after I watched the whole season, that message just seemed to resonate.

[identity profile] mrscutedean.livejournal.com 2006-09-16 12:15 am (UTC)(link)
2's amazing, bless Sammy. Brilliant look at John.

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-16 12:27 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you; I'm so glad they felt true to you.

[identity profile] iamstealthyone.livejournal.com 2006-09-17 04:33 am (UTC)(link)
Nicely done. :) I really enjoyed these little peeks into their lives.

1. It's not until John comes into the room, that he can see where Sam's hand is petting Dean's arm slowly, almost as if he's gentling a horse.

Aww. *pets Sam*

2. John doesn't have to say a word; Dean's already reaching for his jacket. "On it," he says.

I love this, because I can see this moment so clearly in my head.

3. His boys, they poke and prod and needle each other all the time, but they're there for each other and a father can't ask for much more than that.

Amen. *g*

4. It's a simple message and one recorded quickly--If this is an emergency, call my son, Dean. 866-907-3235. He can help--but John's never said anything more true.

Love this. Short, sweet and powerful.

5. Dean lowers the shotgun and John waits until the last of the missing kids is outside--Dean counting them off carefully as John lifts them clear, Sam telling him each one's name--and then he sits down heavily next to Dean and pulls Sammy into his lap.

I really, really like this little detail about Sam telling John each kid’s name. That’s so Sam. *pets Sam*

Thanks for a good read.

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-17 11:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you; I'm so glad you liked them!

#1 - When I started, Sam was just reading to Dean, but then it needed the physical contact.

#2 - Thanks--I had it in my head; it's cool that you saw it, too.

#3 - Yes.

#4 - After I finished all of them, this one really dug its way into my head.

#5 - See, I have this pet theory, that part of the reason that Sam doesn't want to hunt is that he can't step back from it, like Dean can. So yeah, he knew all the kids who were trapped with them. Dean kept them safe and Sam talked to them. /babble

Thanks very much for the comments!

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[identity profile] mcee.livejournal.com 2006-09-17 02:21 pm (UTC)(link)
for some reason it's #4 that got me most right where it counts. sniff.

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-17 11:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, #4 did me in, too, and it was only because I happened to catch the end of Phantom Traveler last week, and after seeing the whole season, that message just kicked me in the teeth. Thanks!

[identity profile] madame-d.livejournal.com 2006-09-17 07:38 pm (UTC)(link)
*sniffles* Oh, these just killed me!

Lil!Sam reading to young!Dean is precious but this -

that he can see where Sam's hand is petting Dean's arm slowly, almost as if he's gentling a horse.

- just melted me. Oh, boys!

Sam's hunched over the kitchen table, engrossed in homework, and no one mentions the ice pack he holds against his knuckles.

Of course Sam wouldn't say anything but Dean would and man, one punch? Violence isn't the answer but it sure it a great start. ;)

Sam's standing and cheering, whistling like Dean taught him

*wibble* I want some canonic proof of things John taught Sam because at this point, I'm willing to believe that everything that Sam learn that isn't hunting, he learnt from Dean.

and then he sits down heavily next to Dean and pulls Sammy into his lap.

*sniff* Of course John loves them and is proud of them beyond anything because they're his boys first and foremost. I may not approve of Papa's actions sometimes, but man, I never doubt his love for his boys. They should've used that outtake from Home, damnit.

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-18 12:40 am (UTC)(link)
Don't die, E!

I tried not to be too sappy here, but I admit that I indulged myself with Sam petting Dean. I couldn't help it. And then, yeah, with the bully, Sam doesn't look dangerous, but he grew up with John and Dean...one punch.

I do think John taught Sam a lot, but stuff like whistling you definitely learn from your older brother. Definitely.

And this whole set--all about the John-love, at least for me. He can make some astounding mistakes, but what parent doesn't, and God, does he love them!

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[identity profile] aizjanika.livejournal.com 2006-09-18 02:52 am (UTC)(link)
I loved all of these. :-) #2 is my favorite, but I love them all.

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-18 01:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you; I'm so glad they worked for you!
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[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-18 05:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, I think the full significance of that message didn't hit me until after I'd seen the whole season and gotten a better feel for John. That he left that message really says everything.

[identity profile] catling42.livejournal.com 2006-09-19 01:33 am (UTC)(link)
oh, I loved these!

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-19 02:25 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!
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[identity profile] dairwendan.livejournal.com 2007-12-14 01:22 am (UTC)(link)
These are amazing! Thank you! This is just how I see John and his relationship with the boys!

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2007-12-14 03:14 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I love John; he's such a complicated, fascinating character. I'm so glad they rang true to you.

[identity profile] rejeneration.livejournal.com 2008-05-11 05:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Hi you! I rec'd this here (http://community.livejournal.com/crack_impala/117097.html). Absolutely loved it! =D

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2008-05-12 05:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! It's so nice to go back and revisit these.

[identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com 2008-05-11 05:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, this totally made tears in my eyes and my throat choke up. Lovely, lovely stuff. Thank you for sharing them!

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2008-05-12 05:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm so glad they felt right to you.

[identity profile] glimmerella.livejournal.com 2008-05-11 06:06 pm (UTC)(link)
This is simply wonderful!

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2008-05-12 05:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] honeymull.livejournal.com 2008-05-11 06:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, this is fantastic. It may've made me just a teeny bit choked up. Oh, Winchesters. The first one makes my heart ache, the second one makes me go "\0/", the third makes me flap around with love for Sam and Deeeaaann (BOYS. Oh, boys. akfjasklfjh), the fourth is gorgeous in its simplicity, and the fifth is a wonderful little peek into their lives working a case. *happy sigh* Lovely job.

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2008-05-12 11:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! I wrote these back when I was just getting a feel for the show and the characters and I'm so pleased they still ring true for you now.

[identity profile] gwendolyngrace.livejournal.com 2008-05-11 08:40 pm (UTC)(link)
These are all great. I love #3, because I also believe that John made the effort and got there when it counted. Like you said, #4 is an elegant indication (and all Dean should have needed) of everything John is - simultaneously placing all his trust in Dean and yet compounding the burden he continually puts at Dean's feet.

I love John and fics that present him in a fair and balanced light are always great to find!

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2008-05-13 12:02 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! When I wrote these, there really wasn't a whole lot about John in canon. I'm really happy that the one that's gotten jossed the most is the last one, and that the other ones have held up. And #4 is the one that still gets me, because Dean still doesn't get *it*. But that's why we're watching, yeah?

[identity profile] enablelove.livejournal.com 2008-05-12 02:31 am (UTC)(link)
Very nicely done. I love the boys relationship with each other and through John's eyes was a nice way to do it!

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2008-05-13 12:08 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! John is definitely an unreliable narrator, but the boys' relationship is never in question.

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