I think what did it for me about this story - and really this series - are the open communication that exists between JC & Justin, especially the whole safe word scene, and the obvious love they have between each other, in the way they care and worry about each other, the effort they put in to satisfy each other, even more than the raw intensity of surrendering.
Thanks! I'm so glad it worked for you--I drove myself (and several long-suffering friends) crazy in trying to make it right and to make it work with the other stories in the series. It was fun to turn the power dynamic around and see how it played out; I think we were all a little surprised at the intensity. Thanks so much for letting me know you liked it!
Thank you! I'm so glad the relationship worked for you; it was really interesting to work through the dynamic as I was writing it. And really, it's never too late for feedback so thanks for commenting. =)
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It was beautifully written and IMO did an excellent job of depicting the relationship between JC and Justin :)
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