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topaz119 ([personal profile] topaz119) wrote2006-09-14 03:59 pm

5 Things - CWrps

For [livejournal.com profile] without_me - Five things Jensen hasn't yet done to Jared that Jared wishes he would.

Pairing: Jared/Jensen
Rating: Adult, a little D/s
Disclaimer: Don't know anyone...


This one ended up being more of Enough



1. More often than not, Jared likes it rough. Jensen doesn't hold back, just watches Jared like a hawk to see how far he can push. They've never really talked about it, any of it, and Jared's not sure how to ask, but he thinks he'd like it if one time, instead of coming in him, Jensen would stop fucking Jared, just stop and pull out and make Jared beg before jerking off on him.


2. Jensen talks to him about it sometimes, when Jared's on his hands and knees and Jensen's fucking him with his hand. You like this, he'll say, his voice smooth and low in Jared's ear. So fucking tight; how many can you take? Jared almost never can answer, but once, he managed to gasp, "All--everything," and now Jensen promises him that someday, they won't have to be ready to work eighteen hour days, they'll have time, and then, he'll do just that.


3. Jared knows which one he wants already. The leather's a rich, deep brown, rather than black, the buckles weathered brass. It's perfectly proportioned for his size, not too wide or too thin. Jensen knows, too; Jared won't have to wait much longer to feel Jensen's hands on his throat, and he knows Jen will pet him, soothe him, before he buckles it tight.


4. There's a spot Jensen loves, right over Jared's hipbone. He's had a bruise there since they stopped just fucking around and started fucking. It will lighten, fade to green and yellow, but Jared knows that before it's totally gone, Jen will kissbitesuck until the skin is stained reddish purple again. He might as well mark Jared permanently, use whatever he wants--ink, knife, brand. Jared wouldn't mind.


5. Chris isn't around often, but when he is, well, there's no missing that there's history between him and Jensen. There's also no missing how much harder Jared gets fucked after a night of the three of them out drinking and shooting pool. Jared's got no problems with that, not at all, but the thing about Chris is that he watches Jared, too, eyes narrowed and thoughtful. Sometimes Jared wonders what it would feel like if Jen gave him to Chris, if he watched while Jared got fucked by Chris. He wonders if Jen would fuck him just as hard as he does now, or if he'd do it harder. Jared's pretty sure about the answer, but he wants to know.
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[personal profile] stellamira 2006-09-14 10:43 pm (UTC)(link)
but he wants to know

I want to know, too! Mmm, I think the day I have, well, enough of this is the day the sun stops coming up in the morning.

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 02:42 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! There's a lot of this bouncing around in our heads; we just need some time to get it all out.
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[identity profile] jellicle.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 01:33 am (UTC)(link)
Oh hell... kinky and hot and woah... Great way to get ready to bed. :)

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 02:43 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks! Always happy to help.

[identity profile] zortified.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 01:35 am (UTC)(link)
...

I think I need to be alone now.

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 02:50 am (UTC)(link)
heh. Thanks!

[identity profile] ilovesn.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 01:50 am (UTC)(link)
I love these.

1 and 2 are my favorites.

*hugggs*

So freaking yummy

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 02:51 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you; so glad they worked for you!

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[identity profile] missyjack.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 02:42 am (UTC)(link)
but he wants to know

So do i baby, so do I!

wonderful hotness!

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 02:52 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you--we'll have to see what happens next. =)

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 01:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks!

[identity profile] eboniorchid.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 05:21 am (UTC)(link)
Did you ... just ... with the ... in #3 ... did you ... umm ... would that be ... did you imply that ... Jen would ... put a ... band of leather ownership around Jared's neck? Oh fuck.

I'm a kink!fic freak, I admit, so I luv D/s fics, but seriously, this was grrreat! I mean, the begging, and the marking, and the ... umm ... sharing with CK. Oh fuck!

Please say you're going to tell us how Jared gets his five wishes. Please, please, please. I can make inspirational pretties. Just ... umm ... yeah ... more? Please.

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 01:41 pm (UTC)(link)
heh. re: #3: Yep, I did.

And yes, there's definitely more of this--I share this lovely world with [livejournal.com profile] without_me and we rarely stop once we get going. Thanks!

[identity profile] wearemany.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 06:05 am (UTC)(link)
i like this turn of phrase the best, i think: since they stopped just fucking around started fucking. but really, i like them all. :)

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 01:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you; so glad they worked for you!

[identity profile] petuli.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 10:46 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, man, "Enough" was just a great fic! And this gave me a wonderul idea.

I would like to read a fic based on enough, like a sequel, where Chris gets involved, the idea of Jensen giving Jared to Chris for one night or the idea of Jared/Jensen/Chris, would totally blow my mind.

Jensen's so hot when he's demanding. And Jared's totally the sub, totally.

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 01:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Glad these worked for you, and there's more than likely to be an actual sequel to Enough. Someday. We just need to find the time.
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[identity profile] greenapricot.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 12:52 pm (UTC)(link)
All of them are way hot but #2. unghGUH.

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 01:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! Glad they worked for you.

[identity profile] coolwhipdiva.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 02:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Love, love, love. And I'm so with Jared -- I wanna know how Jensen wold fuck him after giving him to Chris, too! :D

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 02:21 pm (UTC)(link)
heh. You know it'll happen sooner or later, as soon as we find the time. But thanks, I'm glad to know you liked these in the interim!

[identity profile] ink-in-my-skin.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 02:00 pm (UTC)(link)
#4 - *sigh*
#4 - just so achingly good.......

Thanks.

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 02:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Glad you liked them.

[identity profile] estrella30.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 02:44 pm (UTC)(link)
oh my FUCK, those are just - gah. SO hot I cant even breathe right. holy jesus. wow.

thank you!!

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 03:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!
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[personal profile] poisontaster 2006-09-15 03:26 pm (UTC)(link)
God, I loved Enough and I am hopelessly glazed by anything you want to write in this universe. I don't normally harass authors because I know how much I dislike it...but more? Please? More?

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 04:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Thankyou, thankyou! There *is* more, and playing with these sort of knocked things loose, so hopefully we'll be able to really find out what happens.

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[identity profile] benitle.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 06:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh fuck. Yeah.

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-15 07:14 pm (UTC)(link)
heh. Thanks!
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[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-09-17 01:24 pm (UTC)(link)
heh. The bunnies were multiplying, fast and furious, when I was counting out what I had and trying to think of more. Thanks!

[identity profile] wearethestars.livejournal.com 2006-10-07 06:07 am (UTC)(link)
I've rec'd your fic here (http://community.livejournal.com/spn_themes/4796.html)

Cheers!

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-10-07 12:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks for the link and the very kind words!

[identity profile] nasus221.livejournal.com 2006-11-01 05:35 am (UTC)(link)
Jared, that kinky bastard. *Love*

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-11-01 03:29 pm (UTC)(link)
He's got unexplored depths? hee. Thanks!

[identity profile] nu-breed.livejournal.com 2006-11-11 02:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Jared = hot bitch, oh my god.

And...

Sometimes Jared wonders what it would feel like if Jen gave him to Chris, if he watched while Jared got fucked by Chris.

Oh please, yes. I would fucking pay to see that ;)

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2006-11-14 04:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh please, yes. I would fucking pay to see that

Oh, you know it. gah. It's there in the back of my head and someday, we'll have time to tease it out...

[identity profile] airgiodslv.livejournal.com 2007-03-09 05:28 am (UTC)(link)
Wow. Especially that last one. It's such a treat to see a glimpse of this relationship from the other side. And with all of the little intimacies...the marking, the collaring...right there between them.

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2007-03-09 10:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! And yeah, the last one...I swear, somehow I'll make that work.

[identity profile] sabrinagb.livejournal.com 2007-09-23 11:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Every time I read something more of yours, you just kill me.

5. Chris isn't around often, but when he is, well, there's no missing that there's history between him and Jensen. There's also no missing how much harder Jared gets fucked after a night of the three of them out drinking and shooting pool. Jared's got no problems with that, not at all, but the thing about Chris is that he watches Jared, too, eyes narrowed and thoughtful. Sometimes Jared wonders what it would feel like if Jen gave him to Chris, if he watched while Jared got fucked by Chris. He wonders if Jen would fuck him just as hard as he does now, or if he'd do it harder. Jared's pretty sure about the answer, but he wants to know.

I so, so, so want to see this happen...

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2007-09-24 02:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, me, too! I so need about 10 more hours in the day, or to win the lottery and retire, or SOMETHING. But thank you! These were just quick things that A tossed at me; fun little teases. I'm glad you liked them.

[identity profile] elektrik-storm.livejournal.com 2007-11-17 07:45 pm (UTC)(link)
wow! this is just perfect! did you ever continue it to include Chris? *looks hopeful*

eek!

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2007-11-17 09:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! and no, not yet, though we haven't given up on it yet.

[identity profile] elektrik-storm.livejournal.com 2007-11-17 07:45 pm (UTC)(link)
also, hope you don't mind me friending you!

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2007-11-17 09:47 pm (UTC)(link)
No, not at all--welcome to the crazy. =)

[identity profile] veronamay.livejournal.com 2007-12-28 12:39 am (UTC)(link)
Well now, THAT was fun. Excuse me while I go find some paddles and have my heart restarted after you KILLED IT WITH HOT.

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2007-12-28 09:00 pm (UTC)(link)
hee! Thanks! I'm glad it worked for you ... writing stuff like this is always so dicey. By the time I post, it's just words and I can't ever tell if it's hot or just silly.

[identity profile] spazzer-mctwich.livejournal.com 2008-02-06 10:01 am (UTC)(link)
God, that was such a teas! 2,3, and 5 are my favs.

***but he wants to know.***
So do I!!!

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2008-02-13 04:51 pm (UTC)(link)
#5 definitely needs to be written, for sure. =)

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