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topaz119 ([personal profile] topaz119) wrote2007-04-24 05:14 pm

drabbles

CWrpf
JA/JP,
Adult, mild D/s

These were comment porn for [livejournal.com profile] wendy, but if I don't post them here, I'll forget where I commented and it'll drive me crazy until I find them.

The first two are more of Enough.



The thing about this new ... whatever ... with Jensen is that Jared never has any idea what might happen. Some days, they shoot and hang out and go home and they might fuck, but they might just fall into bed to do it all over again the next day.

Other days, Jared is on his knees every chance they get, Jensen's cock down his throat, his fingers twisting hard in Jared's hair. Or Jensen's holding him against a wall, watching him jack off; telling him how fast, how hard. If Jared's really really good, Jensen will let him come and Jared loves watching Jensen's eyes darken when he does.

And then there are the days when Jensen bends Jared over the couch in his trailer and fingers him deep and rough, not stopping until the AD bangs on the door with the ten minute warning. If Jared can't come from that, he's SOL because Jensen won't touch him anywhere else.

No matter how strung out Jensen leaves him, how frustrated he gets sometime, Jared knows without question that Jensen needs it as much as he does. It might take a while, but it's always worth it in the end.

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Jared's fucking gorgeous like this: hands and knees, whimpering low and hurt every time the leather cracks across his ass and thighs. Jensen traces each mark before he fucks Jared, rubs over them again before he lets Jared come.

It's not until later, while he's smoothing cocoa butter into the welts, Jared almost vibrating under his hands, that he sees where he wasn't careful enough, where he broke the skin. Jared's quiet while Jensen finds the antibiotic cream, but when Jensen whispers an apology, he reaches back, pulls Jensen down with him.

"Sok, Jen," he slurs, half-asleep. "'Mfine, we're fine."

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And then, working off the prompt: Chris Kane teaching Jensen to play the guitar


Jensen doesn't really blame Chris for the attitude--he'd be pissy if he was in Chris's place, with one of Steve's old fuckbuddies showing up. Doesn't mean he's not giving as good as he gets though.

Steve being Steve, he just lets them figure shit out on their own.

Chris blows through one afternoon while Jensen's messing around with one of Steve's guitars. Jensen makes it through a couple of chords, stuff he's heard Steve working on, before he screws up. He eyes Chris, waits for the laughter, but Chris just picks up his own guitar.

"Like this," he says.

[identity profile] without-me.livejournal.com 2007-04-24 09:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Hahahahahahaha "gen" hahahahahaha.

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2007-04-24 09:27 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL; I know, I know, but it would have taken 1000 words to set it up.

[identity profile] without-me.livejournal.com 2007-04-24 09:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Well. You did say "fuckbuddy." I mean, it may be offscreen slash, but it's definitely there.

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2007-04-24 09:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, but it's not the point of the drabble, right? This is why I HATE labels.

[identity profile] phaballa.livejournal.com 2007-04-24 09:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Christ. Those first two, I think you broke my brain with how hot those are. No, seriously. BROKE. What I need is for you to write all my sex scenes for me. I think we could come up with some kind of deal. I mean, I don't know what'd be in it for YOU, but yeah. Jesus. BROKEN. See, I can't even make sentences!

And the last one is very nice, too :)

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2007-04-24 10:21 pm (UTC)(link)
::beams:: Thank you! I still love those two; someday, I swear there will be more, and not just drabbles. And the last one...maybe I'm sneaking up on that story; maybe it'll let itself be figured out. ::crosses fingers::

[identity profile] nu-breed.livejournal.com 2007-04-24 10:24 pm (UTC)(link)
God, I love the Enoughverse so much and I have missed it like crazy.

Those drabbles make me SWEAT.

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2007-04-25 04:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! "Enough" is still rolling around in the back of our heads, so I don't think we're done with it just yet. =)

[identity profile] nu-breed.livejournal.com 2007-04-25 07:53 pm (UTC)(link)
That is the best news I've heard this week :)

[identity profile] darkseaglass.livejournal.com 2007-04-24 10:34 pm (UTC)(link)
I like them. Thanks for posting them where we (I) can enjoy.

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2007-04-25 04:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you--I do things like this, or like the Ricky/JC drabbles and then I forget where I posted them and it makes me crazy until I find them.

[identity profile] wendy.livejournal.com 2007-04-24 11:09 pm (UTC)(link)
I still love these (and you) just as much as the very first time I read them. *beams*

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2007-04-25 04:10 pm (UTC)(link)
We'll sneak up on that sequel to Enough, I swear it. =)

[identity profile] wendy.livejournal.com 2007-04-25 05:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh I know you will, I have faith. I also have it in writing so I'm holding you to it! *grin*

[identity profile] kudra2324.livejournal.com 2007-04-25 12:15 am (UTC)(link)
heh, what [livejournal.com profile] without_me said. except that now i'm mentally fast-forwarding to the post-guitar lesson sex. which is, um, going to happen, right?

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2007-04-25 04:11 pm (UTC)(link)
heh. Sex will happen, but probably not immediately (or even shortly) after the guitar lesson.

Feedback on drabbles

[identity profile] novascotiasam.livejournal.com 2007-04-25 03:07 am (UTC)(link)
So enjoyed them all, but the guitar lesson bonding truce - loved it.

Re: Feedback on drabbles

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2007-04-25 04:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! The guitar lesson--I think I'm sneaking up on a larger story there...

Re: Feedback on drabbles

[identity profile] novascotiasam.livejournal.com 2007-04-26 12:14 am (UTC)(link)
Now, that I would wait patiently for, with intermittent periods of bouncing, of course!

Re: Feedback on drabbles

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2007-04-26 12:25 am (UTC)(link)
The key word there is "patiently" because it's been hanging around forever already. ;)

[identity profile] geneli4.livejournal.com 2007-04-25 02:03 pm (UTC)(link)
mmm, NICE!!!

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2007-04-25 04:12 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks!
stellamira: (Supernatural - Jared's hips)

[personal profile] stellamira 2007-04-25 05:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Mmm, I love what you're doing with Enough, and I love most that it's not a one-sided thing but that they both put so much in and get a lot out of it.

And the last one just makes me love Chris.

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2007-04-26 12:24 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah, it's very much a two-sided affair in Enough. And Chris and Jensen in that last one, ohhh, the ISSUES. Thanks so much for commenting!

[identity profile] unholyglee.livejournal.com 2007-05-02 12:20 pm (UTC)(link)
[twirls you]

and I agree with A. Gen? [slaps knee]

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2007-05-02 02:22 pm (UTC)(link)
*giggles and hopes you don't throw your back out*

And the thing with the Jensen & Chris is...there's a LOT of story going on around that one, with more pairings and criss-crosses than a soap opera and it would have taking 1000 words to explain the 100 words of the drabble. But yeah, gen on the surface? In that there hasn't been anything going on between them yet? ... shut up.

[identity profile] unholyglee.livejournal.com 2007-05-02 11:41 pm (UTC)(link)
So, you do know that whenever you get off your crazybusy duff and write all this backstory out? That I plan to be let in on it. You don't really get a choice in it. That's how I do. [beams]

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2007-05-03 09:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Hah. Don't think I won't sucker you into reading this when it gets out of the total mess stage.

[identity profile] unholyglee.livejournal.com 2007-05-04 12:57 am (UTC)(link)
[WINS]

[identity profile] not-sally.livejournal.com 2007-08-31 10:20 pm (UTC)(link)
So, wow, I really like your writing. I'm gonna try and catch up with your work, but I was wondering, is there more "Enough" planned?

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2007-09-01 06:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Hi! Thanks--I'm glad you like it all. There is more Enough planned--[livejournal.com profile] without_me and I just have to get in sync on it. But we love those guys, a LOT. =)

[identity profile] calijirl5150.livejournal.com 2007-12-11 06:34 am (UTC)(link)
Oh I so love the "Enoughverse" ::begs pretty please for more & on my knees too!!::

[identity profile] topaz119.livejournal.com 2007-12-11 07:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, thank you! I love them, too, but they're a bitch to write, to figure them out and get them into the right headspace. But, they haven't gone away; we just have to keep poking them.

[identity profile] calijirl5150.livejournal.com 2007-12-11 09:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Poking is always good :D